His death left me a bit shell shocked, and it was handled well in regards to mood. At times this works, note the game scenes as well as the interview, but mostly it just drags the scenes on for longer than they should. I knew how Neil opened doors and how he walked, and how he moved his fingers, before I had a clear idea of what he looked like. Beyond the writing style, the author chooses to over describe everything. This is a problem that lends itself to destroy a good deal of the fun in figuring things out. This also leads the the mystery being erased relatively fast, as a reader wondering who Kevin really was to Neil it was disappointing to get the answer handed to me so early on. The dialogue is jilted, with character’s randomly dumping exposition on your head whenever they can. I am not the first person, nor will I be the last, to point out how poorly written these books are when compared to other’s in their genre, and just in general. Neil getting called a whore, don’t ask why it made me laugh. Seth flipping off both his and the opposing team. Gorilla and his interactions with the other characters brings such a lively change to the dynamics. The character interactions are so well done.
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